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hwa ([personal profile] hwarium) wrote in [community profile] 17hols2021-11-25 01:04 pm

2022 Round 1: Quotes

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Seventeen Holidays
Round 1: Quotes


About

"If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more."

"What is grief, if not love persevering?"

"You kept me like a secret but I kept you like an oath"

Calling all readers, lovers of poetry and music, screen and stage. Quote collecters and lyric hoarders, unleash your archive. Each prompt must contain a quote - you can combine them, add commentary, link to articles, and more. Steal from a literary classic, or WeVerse drama. Have fun!


Examples


Minghao + Ocean Vuong
The most beautiful part of your body
is where it's headed. & remember,
loneliness is still time spent
with the world.

Ocean Vuong - night sky with exit wounds

Hoshi/Anyone; "Beauty is terror"
Thinking about these two quotes together and the idea of on/off-stage personas:

"Beauty is terror. Whatever we call beautiful we tremble before it. And what could be more terrifying or beautiful, to the Greeks to to our own, than to lose control completely?" - Donna Tartt, the Secret Histories

"I am calm in everyday life but when I put on my in-ear device and step on stage, I can feel the tension and hear the cheers getting louder as the music gets louder. When the staff tells me it's time to step on stage, I feel something boil inside me. I feel it steaming inside and I think I have to give a burst of something, spill what is inside me." - Hoshi in Hit the Road Ep. 04


Any ship; "It's been so many years"
Hello, hello there, is this Martha?
This is old Tom Frost
And I am calling long distance
Don't worry 'bout the cost.
'Cause it's been forty years or more
Now Martha please recall
Meet me out for coffee
Where we'll talk about it all.

Tom Watts - Martha

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Prompting
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  3. Copy+Paste the following HTML into your comment and edit the sections. Feel free to add as much detail as you want!

Filling
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  2. Change the subject to [FILL], you may add a title or stay chaotic;
  3. Copy+Paste the following HTML into your comment, edit the sections, and add your text.

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  1. Post as a reply to the fill you are remixing, using the same HTML as above;
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deadwine: a page from dickinson's herbarium (Default)

[FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-28 11:49 am (UTC)(link)
Ship/Member: Minghao (& The8)
Major Tags: N/A
Additional Tags: poetry, experimental? open to interpretation, idolverse??? can be read as both gen or romantic
Permission to remix: Yes/No/Please ask
WC: 404 (hwa, take note)

A/N: I have absolutely no idea what this is and I haven't tried anything like it before so if it's an unintelligible mess (or just vagueass purple prose) please bear with me.
***

When I was younger—are you listening? No, no one’s about to die.

Hey, I love you—but don’t call me morbid for this one.

When I was a young boy my mother took me swimming to the creek that ran behind the inn, the one that all the rich kids at school swore was cursed and the girls claimed had never seen a night without blood.

But I wanted to swim so desperately, my mother spent all morning in prayer and in the afternoon, she walked me to the creek, hand-in-hand, only parting from me at the water’s edge, with a kiss pressed to my forehead.

You know how this story goes don’t you? I flew like a bird and sank like a stone to the bottom of the riverbed and my mother screamed and screamed until the crowd that had begun to gather made way for the boy who would drag my heaving body back to shore.

Have you ever watched a body writhe and twist itself on a barren riverbank? Have you ever watched a fish die?

I told you it wasn’t going to be morbid—no, I’m not about to ask you if you have ever killed a fish with your bare hands.

Have you?

Have you ever had water pumped out of your lungs, love? They say you never forget the first clean breath of air after all the water has poured out of you and I took mine inside somebody else’s mouth.

Yesterday when you asked me why we always travel from land to mountain, why I never come to the beach with you and your friends, when you asked me if I was afraid of the ocean, I wanted to tell you that you are never who you were before you drowned.

Yes—I know I was saved, that’s not what I’m saying. Pay attention, would you?

What I’m saying is that the moment between my body breaking the water’s surface and it’s sinking, the moment when I was suspended and hurtling towards an inevitable flood: I was not afraid. I was waiting.

What I’m saying is when I was younger I once drowned and it wasn’t the saving that saved me but the drowning.

Do you understand?

There was water in my lungs, love. It got out.

I’ll say it again, listen carefully this time.

There is water in my lungs. I don’t want it out.
Edited 2021-12-28 11:50 (UTC)
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Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] latespring 2021-12-29 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
!!!!!!!!!!!! this is so cool, I love where you took it, and the back and forth with a speaker. and the water imagery!!!! wow wow wow. They say you never forget the first clean breath of air after all the water has poured out of you and I took mine inside somebody else’s mouth. is going to stick with me!
deadwine: a page from dickinson's herbarium (Default)

Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 10:04 am (UTC)(link)
thank you for that prompt. i kept putting it aside and then went fuck it and...somehow this happened. I'm glad you liked the back and forth, i was a little hesitant on including that.
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Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] klav 2021-12-29 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
WHAT THE **** PB I AM SCREAMING
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Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] klav 2021-12-29 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
Have you ever had water pumped out of your lungs, love? They say you never forget the first clean breath of air after all the water has poured out of you and I took mine inside somebody else’s mouth.
I wanted to tell you that you are never who you were before you drowned.
What I’m saying is when I was younger I once drowned and it wasn’t the saving that saved me but the drowning.
I have no words I'm just going to parrot these back at you. Thank you MAN this is beautiful. Also deeply sad and terrifying and creative and horny and introspective and I LOVE it. (not to mention the title. KEYSMASH FOR A HUNDRED YEARS)
deadwine: a page from dickinson's herbarium (Default)

Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 10:05 am (UTC)(link)
KLAV T____T
i hope you get me back with even more sad terrifying horny watery introspections <333
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Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] cruelsummers 2021-12-29 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
What I’m saying is when I was younger I once drowned and it wasn’t the saving that saved me but the drowning.
oh my god this entire piece is so haunting... this line is a kick in the teeth!!!
deadwine: a page from dickinson's herbarium (Default)

Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 10:04 am (UTC)(link)
oohmygod thank you so much!!
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Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] oeillet 2021-12-29 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
i don't think i can string together a comment that could express how i feel about this but!! this is so stunning and visceral and i know this will stay with me for a long time. i couldn't pick a favourite sentence, each feels like a (good) punch in the lungs, thank you for this!
deadwine: a page from dickinson's herbarium (Default)

Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] deadwine 2022-01-04 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOSH thank you, this is such high praise, im very grateful *_*
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Re: [FILL] hungrier/tides

[personal profile] slytherminie 2022-01-02 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU ARE SO FUCKING GOOD ALL THE GODDAMN TIME HOW THE HELL DO YOU DO IT I'M OBSESSED.
i love metaphors about water and drowning and this is just soooooooooooooooo. so. so incredible. i love you.