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hwa ([personal profile] hwarium) wrote in [community profile] 17hols2021-11-25 01:04 pm

2022 Round 1: Quotes

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Seventeen Holidays
Round 1: Quotes


About

"If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more."

"What is grief, if not love persevering?"

"You kept me like a secret but I kept you like an oath"

Calling all readers, lovers of poetry and music, screen and stage. Quote collecters and lyric hoarders, unleash your archive. Each prompt must contain a quote - you can combine them, add commentary, link to articles, and more. Steal from a literary classic, or WeVerse drama. Have fun!


Examples


Minghao + Ocean Vuong
The most beautiful part of your body
is where it's headed. & remember,
loneliness is still time spent
with the world.

Ocean Vuong - night sky with exit wounds

Hoshi/Anyone; "Beauty is terror"
Thinking about these two quotes together and the idea of on/off-stage personas:

"Beauty is terror. Whatever we call beautiful we tremble before it. And what could be more terrifying or beautiful, to the Greeks to to our own, than to lose control completely?" - Donna Tartt, the Secret Histories

"I am calm in everyday life but when I put on my in-ear device and step on stage, I can feel the tension and hear the cheers getting louder as the music gets louder. When the staff tells me it's time to step on stage, I feel something boil inside me. I feel it steaming inside and I think I have to give a burst of something, spill what is inside me." - Hoshi in Hit the Road Ep. 04


Any ship; "It's been so many years"
Hello, hello there, is this Martha?
This is old Tom Frost
And I am calling long distance
Don't worry 'bout the cost.
'Cause it's been forty years or more
Now Martha please recall
Meet me out for coffee
Where we'll talk about it all.

Tom Watts - Martha

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Prompting
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  3. Copy+Paste the following HTML into your comment and edit the sections. Feel free to add as much detail as you want!

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  2. Change the subject to [FILL], you may add a title or stay chaotic;
  3. Copy+Paste the following HTML into your comment, edit the sections, and add your text.

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seokmin_liker: (Default)

:)

[personal profile] seokmin_liker 2021-12-26 11:08 am (UTC)(link)
Ship/Member: minghao/anyone
Major Tags: N/A
Additional Tags: i don't mind - this can be any universe you want!
Do Not Wants: None

Prompt:
Of him I love day and night I dream’d I heard he was dead, / And I dream’d I went where they had buried him I love, but he was not in that place, / And I dream’d I wander’d searching among burial-places to find him, / And I found that every place was a burial-place

- Walt Whitman, Of Him I Love Day and Night
deadwine: a page from dickinson's herbarium (Default)

[FILL] what was left when that fire was gone?

[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-26 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Ship/Member: Minghao/ Yixing (EXO)
Major Tags: N/A
Additional Tags: idolverse/canonverse, unhealthy relationships, death as a metaphor for breakups
Permission to remix: Yes
word count: 400, gunning for that spot~

A/N: Apparently I'm making writing this ship for 17hols an annual thing, sorry for starting us off with a crossover pairing but this grabbed me and took me like thirty minutes to write so. If it's too vague, that's my excuse.

***


Don’t read my eulogy when I’m no longer here to hear it, Yixing liked to say.
Love me when I’m here, don’t love me when I’m gone, his voice boomed across the stadium, sparking fires under Minghao’s skin through the static of his earphones.

Elbows-deep into the sandpit of the playground where Yixing first kissed him, Minghao asks the dirt lining his nails: then why’d you leave before I had the chance to write it?





The exorcism in Beijing takes the longest. Minghao bids his time writing, dancing, forgetting.

The years don’t weather the engraving on the tombstone when Minghao finally arrives.

Don’t love me when I’m gone, it haunts him, the six measured steps between them on set as Yixing leads, everyone else follows.

Two years later Minghao finds yet another Yixing in Shanghai, who sees, across the same six steps the same boy he left behind—dancing.





Seoul’s ghosts are innumerable. Tucked into rented studio buildings, abandoned green rooms and restaurants Junhui hunts out in Jongno only to catch the flash of recognition in Minghao’s eyes.

Sometimes they crawl out of the woodworks, out of loose lips and trade secrets shared between people who know better than to expect miracles out of dead-end streets. Minghao can only pretend, reminded as he is yet again he can’t expect people to mourn that which they have no memory of.

Don’t love me when I’m gone.

Then don’t leave, Minghao wishes he had screamed, wishes he had clutched at the lowering coffin, unearthed the still-warm flesh and pleaded it back to life.

If Seoul is a cenotaph, Minghao is its sole crypt-keeper.





Minghao returns home dreaming of freedom.

Don’t love me when I’m gone.

Idiot, he thinks now. It’s the other way round. There’s nowhere to go until they’re done loving you.

He drinks his tea. He dances with his mother on the balcony. He enquiries after the living.

The house is a newborn, holding no history of his childhood, yet the face staring back at him in the mirror is ten years too young.

Don’t love me when I’m gone.

The part that goes unsaid? The dead will stay dead and you’ll live frozen at the age you stopped growing out of love.

Minghao cradles the mirror’s frame with his mud-stained hands and asks the ghost standing behind it: why’d you leave before I had the chance to kill you?

seokmin_liker: (Default)

Re: [FILL] what was left when that fire was gone?

[personal profile] seokmin_liker 2021-12-26 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
SCREAMING AND YELLING. you absolute genius... you've taken it in such a different direction to what i was expecting and i absolutely LOVE that. your writing is so beautiful, with the extended metaphor of death - every reference just punched me in the gut, ESPECIALLY calling minghao the crypt-keeper of seoul. and all that stuff about aging and never quite growing after that love was so powerful too... and all in just 400 words! insane! you're really incredible to be able to write something so impactful so concisely. thank you thank you thank you <3
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Re: [FILL] what was left when that fire was gone?

[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 09:50 am (UTC)(link)
THANK YOUUUU your prompt just grabbed me immediately and i was like. Oh well. Here we go then. <333333
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[personal profile] klav 2021-12-26 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
This is beautiful and it hurts and you're so cool and I can't believe you've opened 17hols this way!!!! So happy to see your tradition of Minghao/Yixing continue T__T thank you for this.
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[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 09:51 am (UTC)(link)
gosh thinking of writing minghao/yixing in the year 2022...2023 GODDD

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[personal profile] pamantha 2021-12-26 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
The dead will stay dead and you’ll live frozen at the age you stopped growing out of love. is such a raw, powerful line. All of this punches so hard, the imagery is so so good!!!
Edited 2021-12-26 21:00 (UTC)
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[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 09:51 am (UTC)(link)
imagery?!!! wow, thank you for that!
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[personal profile] slytherminie 2021-12-26 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
WOW JUST WOW. i'm always a fan of your words and how you manage to say so much in so little. the metaphors in here deliver the perfect punch and gosh, i love every single line. you're so cool!!!
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[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 09:52 am (UTC)(link)
lilli!!!!! YOU are so cool, ty ty!
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[personal profile] sunwalkr 2021-12-27 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
wife… i’m head in hands cradling my heart. you are just so good. i smooch your brain. i love the way you play with the imagery, the eerieness, the grief etched in all corners of this. what a start to 17hols. what a start

(my favorite line: Don’t love me when I’m gone.

The part that goes unsaid? The dead will stay dead and you’ll live frozen at the age you stopped growing out of love.
)
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Re: [FILL] what was left when that fire was gone?

[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 09:53 am (UTC)(link)
ahhh thank you, it felt like i wa saying too little for a moment there, but thank you!
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[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 09:54 am (UTC)(link)
thank you haha may 17hols continue to birthe more minghaoyixings ~
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[personal profile] vampiredumpling 2021-12-27 12:37 pm (UTC)(link)
hello this is beyond lovely and i dont have the words to express just how much i find it so! the way you used death as a metaphor is so cool. this line and its paragraph, in particular, struck me so much:

Minghao cradles the mirror’s frame with his mud-stained hands and asks the ghost standing behind it: why’d you leave before I had the chance to kill you?

the way minghao is so haunted by the ghost of yixing that he himself acts and lives very much like a ghost. oooh just absolute chills. i loved reading this thank you so much!
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[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 09:55 am (UTC)(link)
'that he himself acts and lives like a ghost' wjf gosh thank you for that!!! i feel like I'm gonna look at my own writing in a new light !!!
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[personal profile] thesolemneyed 2021-12-28 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
this !!! god this hurt but in such a good way !! "The house is a newborn, holding no history of his childhood" i lost my damn mind you are a genius
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[personal profile] deadwine 2021-12-29 09:55 am (UTC)(link)
aaaa peb thank you, as always!!!