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2025 Round: Quotes

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2025 Round: Quotes


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Calling all readers, lovers of poetry and music, screen and stage. Quote collecters and lyric hoarders, unleash your archive. For this round, every prompt must contain a quote - you can combine them, add commentary, link to articles, do whatever. Steal from a literary classic, or copy a hit tweet.


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hyojungss: zhou jieqiong (Default)

don't you wonder about me?

[personal profile] hyojungss 2024-12-27 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Ship/Member: Any
Major Tags: N/A
Additional Tags: love that isn't fully reciprocated or that is imbalanced in some way
Do Not Wants: None

Prompt:
Baby, I love you
. . . . . . . .

- STAYC, GPT

tenderlyache: (Default)

[FILL] . . . . . . . .

[personal profile] tenderlyache 2024-12-29 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Ship/Member: Wonwoo/Junhui
Major Tags: N/A
Additional Tags: canonverse (early/debut days), ambiguous relationships, repression
Permission to remix: yes

***

In Junhui’s defense, his mouth was full of kimbap.

He thought it was an understandable excuse for inaccurate pronunciation while rehashing his and Minghao’s argument. Not to Wonwoo, apparently.

“Siot is a little breathy. Ssang siot is more tense.” Wonwoo demonstrated it. “Do you hear the difference?”

Junhui chewed. “Not really, no.”

“Listen.” Wonwoo enunciated a consonant, slow and careful. “Which one was that?”

“Erm.” Junhui swallowed his mouthful and slurped at his last of his drink to wash it down. The straw made a loud rattle in the empty cup, a sound Minghao would have scolded him for. He put his cup down. “Ssang siot?”

Wonwoo shook his head. “Siot.”

Junhui was a student of application. He was consistent, if not particularly studious, about his Korean lessons. The members were the most effective teachers anyway. Those lessons stuck. Textbook memorization? Not so much.

“Anyway,” said Junhui abruptly. “What do you think I should do now?”

“I can re-explain the difference in another way,” offered Wonwoo patiently, “or I can quiz you again?”

“You’re missing the point, Wonwoo,” said Junhui lightly. “I was saying words, not just consonants.”

“What?”

“My argument with Myungho — what should I do now?”





(“Wonwoo,” said Junhui, through a bite of mackerel. “I . . . . . . . .” He choked, fishbone caught in his throat.

Wonwoo thumped Junhui’s back. “What were you saying?”

“Fishbone,” spluttered Junhui, coughing. “I can still feel it.”

“Swallow it,” advised Wonwoo. “Eat another bite of rice. That’s what I do. It’ll push it further down your throat.”

“But I don’t want that,” Junhui said stubbornly, voice hoarse. His chest hurt. “I want it out.”

Wonwoo blinked. “I don’t know if I can help with that.”)





Wonwoo found Junhui in one of the company’s meeting rooms. Junhui was hunched over his unfinished Korean assignment, mouthing vocabulary words to himself.

“Oh, Wonwoo!” Junhui sat up straighter, his grin lazy. “Is it my turn to record? Were you looking for me?”

“I didn’t know you were here. They were being loud in the studio. And my head hurts.”

“I can be quiet,” promised Junhui.

Wonwoo gave him a little smile. “You don’t have to. Go back to what you were doing. Pretend I’m not here.”

Junhui laughed, half breath, half sound. “As if that were possible….” But he turned back to his assignment obediently.

The silence lasted a full ten seconds.

“Wonwoo. Are you busy?”

“Hm?”

“The members always say you’re good at Korean.” Junhui dipped his voice to a comically low tone. “Teacher Jeon Wonwoo, please save me…”

“What do you need to learn?”

“Well, we’re working on relationship terms right now. Chapter seven. For example, you are my-” Junhui sounded it out: “Co-work-er.”

“Is that all I am to you?” teased Wonwoo.

“No, you’re-” Junhui switched to Mandarin for the words he couldn’t yet express. “You’re my . . . . . . . . too.”

“What does that mean?”

Junhui averted his gaze. “Hmm. We haven’t gotten that far in the lesson yet.”

“Try to tell me.”

Junhui paused. “I don’t know how to explain it in a way you would understand.” He looked down at the open Korean workbook. “So did I say it right? Co-work-er?”

“Yes, you’re my coworker. But you’re also my roommate.” Wonwoo enunciated each word, slow and careful. “You’re my member.” Wonwoo looked away. “You’re my . . . . . . . . and my friend.”

“What did you say?”

“Friend?”

“No, no, I know. Soonyoung taught me that one. Friend,” repeated Junhui impatiently. “What did you say before that?”

“Coworker, roommate, member, friend?”

“There was something else.” Junhui scanned the Korean workbook futilely. “Never mind. Maybe I misheard. Guess I still need more Korean lessons…”

Wonwoo hummed noncommittally.





When Junhui was alone again, he pulled out his speech-to-text app, fumbling at mimicked pronunciation. It took eight tries before his phone recognized his utterance and spit out something close to intelligible. Even then, he wasn’t sure if he got it right.

Did you mean: 짝사랑?

Junhui copied the text. Pasted it. Pressed translate.
hyojungss: zhou jieqiong (Default)

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[personal profile] hyojungss 2024-12-31 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
woww i love the way you used the ... concept!!! setting it early enough that junhui's got room for doubt as far as his korean listening comprehension. that ending is so good!

and on the other hand the jun choking out the fishbone vs wonwoo swallowing it metaphor... i enjoyed this so much thank you for filling!! :D
tenderlyache: (Default)

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[personal profile] tenderlyache 2025-01-04 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
i'm so glad you liked it! this was such a delicious prompt that i'm still mulling over because i think it'd be interesting to lean further into a wonhui re: love that isn't fully reciprocated. thank you so much for commenting! (& introducing me to this song - i've been listening to it a bunch since writing this)
delicatesse: (Default)

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[personal profile] delicatesse 2025-01-01 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
waaaah i loved this!! sneaky wonwoo!!!!
tenderlyache: (Default)

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[personal profile] tenderlyache 2025-01-04 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
sneaky wonwoo indeed! thank you for reading & commenting ♡
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[personal profile] cheapdates 2025-01-01 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
i LOVED the concept of this. i am a fiend for twists on the ~miscommunication trope and this was so good. that ending hit hard because i knew it was a leading towards A Big Moment but I couldn't tell who we'd get it from. oh, wonwoo ;-;
tenderlyache: (Default)

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[personal profile] tenderlyache 2025-01-04 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
i also love twists on the miscommunication trope so i'm glad you enjoyed this! purposeful miscommunication bc is it a really a confession if you don't expect it to be intelligible to the other person...? or perhaps just a mishearing/mispronunciation on jun's part at the end......

thank you so much for reading & taking the time to let me know what you thought!! ♡♡
goochilz: (bb 2)

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[personal profile] goochilz 2025-01-02 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
loveeeed this..i lov to see language being employed as almost a plot point/key feature of the story & the way it's told...i loved the parenthetical about junhui wanting to get the fishbone out rather than swallow it down...and finally, wonwoo admitting what he does about jun behing his 짝사랑 hits so perfectly..so beautifully done, thank you for sharing (,:
Edited 2025-01-02 02:40 (UTC)
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[personal profile] tenderlyache 2025-01-04 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
yes exactly!! language barrier in a relationship is something i've been meaning to tap into for a while, so i'm glad you enjoyed this. thank you so much for reading & commenting!! ♡♡
kisoap: ([felix] star boy)

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[personal profile] kisoap 2025-01-06 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
ohhhh i love this!! i really like how much of this resolves around their language barrier here... wonwoo showing his love by helping junhui with korean, even when all junhui wanted in the moment was to be heard, the fishbone scene... just really good representations of where they're not eye to eye but still an underlying fondness and kindness between them... so good!!

also the part where junhui only pretends for 10 seconds that wonwoo's not there, “Teacher Jeon Wonwoo, please save me…” - your junhui is so endearing TT___TT ♡ and the ending - so clever that us readers are left to follow junhui's same motions to figure out what wonwoo (potentially) confessed!! really enjoyed this, thank you for writing such a lovely wonhui ♡
tenderlyache: (Default)

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[personal profile] tenderlyache 2025-01-24 05:42 am (UTC)(link)
oh thank you so much!! re: "they're not eye to eye but still an underlying fondness and kindness between them" this comment made me so happy to read because yes exactly! you get it! i thought this type of dynamic where they're both talking past each other & not quite getting the point across to the other party (to the extent that it could be interpreted as one-sided, even if each side is well-intentioned) was fascinating to consider. i was so glad to hear that the fondness & kindness came through too, since i had been a little worried that it wouldn't

wjh impulse control ;___; he lasted for 10 whole seconds haha. thank you so much for such a thoughtful & kind reading of my fic!! ♡♡
kumquat: kpop (soonwoo)

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[personal profile] kumquat 2025-01-07 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
i loved this a lot.. have been going about my days recently just thinking about it. you used the . . . . . . . so cleverly, and i love how it draws a parallel between the fishbone and the words they’re not fully able to make each other understand. wnh really are such a good duo to play with the ambiguously unreciprocated dynamic and u captured their respective love languages and attachment styles so well here, that fishbone scene is so brilliant for that!! ww repressed acts of service swallowing his own feelings, jh frustrated that his mouth can’t keep up with his brain and a bit of a jokester to avoid thinking about his feelings too much. thank u for writing i enjoyed it so much!!
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[personal profile] tenderlyache 2025-01-24 05:45 am (UTC)(link)
jess!! thank you so much for reading & for this lovely comment ♡ reading it was so gratifying because you pointed out so many aspects of the wwjn dynamic that i was hoping to get across. ambiguously unreciprocated ;__; that's them! both intentionally & unintentionally communicating in ways that are not entirely intelligible to the other party....... i'm so glad you enjoyed this! thank you so much for reading & taking the time to let me know what you thought!! ♡♡