Someone wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-02-12 12:51 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] night reminiscin'

hello, it's fei!! there are so many lines i want to quote oh my god... them being entangled in each other's lives despite being apart for so many years T___T jun and the concept of home/language is so very dear to me and i love how you explored that part of his character while also using it to give more backstory to them. i feel gutted... the whole time i was reading, i had the vivid imagery of wonwoo always helping jun with his korean and i'm just inconsolable at the way this entire language has become a permanent connection between them;; really almost cried at this, they've both left such an important mark on each other's lives that it still influences them 10 years later. HELLO IN KOREAN IS ALSO GOODBYE!! but if that's true, then that's not to say that the reverse can't be true as well!! the way this was used in this fic is *chef's kiss* LIKE WOW... i also adore the way you had wonwoo summon the bravery to reason out the possibilities of that sentence with logic and then turn it into an opportunity for them, and how jun takes the leap. they're so brave and genuinely vulnerable in front of each other in this, i love them ;_; wish i could somehow do a line by line commentary on this that wouldn't make this comment bible-length, but know i was hanging on to every sentence and gasping at every other one T__T i'm really so happy i got to read this, it was perfect!!! <3

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