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pamantha ([personal profile] pamantha) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-30 10:38 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILLL] what’s wrong with secretary josh?

ohhhhhh my god. This is so dynamic and compelling and densely packed, Joshua's internal monologue re: jerk at the bar. Letting himself be talked over like that. The shift between him before Minghao and after. GIVING HIM HIS WARM SCARF. “Aren’t you going to invite me up?” ......... This is so good, this feels like a thin, self-contained slice from a moving, overarching story/relationship. The details were lovely, your Josh was lovely, the tension between Minghao and Josh was SO GOOD. Joshua likes being looked at, usually, when it's Minghao. // Sometimes he even lets himself look back. I really loved reading this (and your background gyuhan. talented, brilliant, incredible, show-stopping), I really wish that this was a 150k slowburn that I could sink into for days!! you are so good and talented, thank you for sharing!!!!

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