"pretty and extremely unsettling bruxa soonyoung" is a Very Good soonyoung and I love him. I've recently caught up with S2 (if the quote didn't give that away already) so this was already a Meal for me before I even start reading. actually I'd seen your tweet re this prompt and I was anticipating hehehe but you've given me more than I'd prepared for so...okay I'll try to be coherent here.
The forbidden yet irresistible attraction between them sprinkled throughout is *_____* delicious. Like. Mingyu's realisation in, He was spared. hit him as hard as it hit me. “Mingyu,” he whispers, and it feels like a confession, a prohibited word. Despite that and the constant warning from his buzzing medallion, my boy just went ahead and let himself be led to a secluded place...please. He's down bad.
The way you used red here: Mingyu himself is on the brink of death, red oozing out of his chest as he lies motionless on the snow, eyes on the dark and tall branches over his head. & the apple of his cheeks rosy, his eyes alight with hope, his hair a mess from where Mingyu’s fingers tugged at it. & For now, he lets Soonyoung curl around him and falls into dreams where red isn’t a colour. makes the piece so vivid, sets the world against a crimson backdrop which is a perfect setting ;____;
He was spared. and "I was curious," he says, his face swimming in Mingyu's vision, "to see if you would come back." juxtaposed with Once again, he was spared. and “Can you stay?” Soonyoung asks, voice soft, a murmur against Mingyu’s neck. ...they are everything to me.
Thank you for filling this!! You're brilliant and bruxa Soonyoung only makes the story more compelling (and darker and sexier...I want more of where that blood-drinking came from). It's always a pleasure to read your writing. <3
Re: [FILL]: one breath away
The forbidden yet irresistible attraction between them sprinkled throughout is *_____* delicious. Like. Mingyu's realisation in, He was spared. hit him as hard as it hit me. “Mingyu,” he whispers, and it feels like a confession, a prohibited word. Despite that and the constant warning from his buzzing medallion, my boy just went ahead and let himself be led to a secluded place...please. He's down bad.
The way you used red here: Mingyu himself is on the brink of death, red oozing out of his chest as he lies motionless on the snow, eyes on the dark and tall branches over his head. & the apple of his cheeks rosy, his eyes alight with hope, his hair a mess from where Mingyu’s fingers tugged at it. & For now, he lets Soonyoung curl around him and falls into dreams where red isn’t a colour. makes the piece so vivid, sets the world against a crimson backdrop which is a perfect setting ;____;
He was spared. and "I was curious," he says, his face swimming in Mingyu's vision, "to see if you would come back." juxtaposed with Once again, he was spared. and “Can you stay?” Soonyoung asks, voice soft, a murmur against Mingyu’s neck. ...they are everything to me.
Thank you for filling this!! You're brilliant and bruxa Soonyoung only makes the story more compelling (and darker and sexier...I want more of where that blood-drinking came from). It's always a pleasure to read your writing. <3