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replaydebut ([personal profile] replaydebut) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-25 07:47 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] the rabbit in the hat

wow this was so amazing! I love the details of the worldbuilding and the way it all feels so..perfunctory in a way? The straightforward presentation of jeonghan’s death, the bureaucratic process of the “resurrection package,” the way seokmin can feel it’s not the same but he still goes through with it bc the pain of losing jeonghan feels like it would be too unbearable…vs jeonghan’s simple “ah” when he’s resurrected. Idk how to explain it but that line is so small, just one word/sound but it conveys SO much about jeonghan as a person and in this fic specifically…that he thinks seokmin should have let him go, but he knows seokmin isn’t the type of person to do that so he’s like “ah I see..we’re doing this now” and then he tries to make it work but you can tell nothing will be the same…aahhhh it’s all so complex and emotionally layered and you presented it so effortlessly! Thank you for writing!

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