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vee ([personal profile] fleurissons) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-24 09:04 pm (UTC)

Re: [REMIX] the abyss gazes also into you

you said Anticipate but you didn't say Prepare to Get Destroyed, which I have been. once again super amazed that you've tackled only mildly familiar subject matter with such expertise!! you did so well, so let's just get that straight right from the beginning.

love the choice of providing an alternate point of view, so now the two pieces can complete each other! yeay for a collaborative effort.

Seungcheol...putting on armour only to have them shed off his body with a single look from Mingyu...the kang yohanisms is strong in this one...how do you even know he's hovering outside the door!! Must be love if you tuned in your senses to note how the air tastes when he's around. Rolls my eyes affectionately at these gays.

“A well-earned seat. You have -- it is quite a pleasant face” and Mingyu’s breath trembles on its next exit. oh what you did here was so good! the implication that from Mingyu's POV he missed out on a couple of words because Seungcheol's proximity distracted him so ;_____;

ON GOD. He traces a finger over where he remembers to be the wings idly, wonders if Mingyu dreams of mended wings and breaking chains, of greeting the sun and feeling the wind sprint through his lungs. He wonders if Mingyu dreams of being free of him. how dare you do this. how dare you make Seungcheol think this way with the predisposed knowledge that Mingyu is thinking the opposite. that Mingyu decidedly does NOT want to be free of him. I am coming for you.

Mingyu looks up at him like a man spellbound by the sick beauty of death. the sick beauty of you!!!! in darkness some men find a home and you have one worthy of building castles in!!!!

I love this, you have a way with words that's just *______* very pleasant to enjoy. I don't know what you have in store next but I know what to get ready for now. Thank you!!! <3

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