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vee ([personal profile] fleurissons) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-24 08:53 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL]: last tender place to sink your teeth in

I HAVE ARRIVED. it is currently 7:30 AM and I got some croissants in my system just so I won't go apeshit. here we go. first of all "both monsters of a different kind" HAHAAAAAA.....if we want to be loved we have to submit to the mortifying ordeal of being known etc etc but for once I'm glad I'm known. sorry not sorry this starts off as a love letter. it probably is.

the opening exposition helps put things in perspective for me, like i know it leads wonwoo to jeonghan & war is obviously a significant happening, but not so much that it shadows their encounter (...and the implications of a shared history) like: “I had hoped that you were going to be the first here.” and There is still wet patch of blood on Jeonghan’s cheeks, Wonwoo rids Jeonghan of it with a brush of his thumb. “You’ve never been a monster.” AND I want you to take what you’ve always wanted to take from me.

AND!!!!! (one more and)

It had only been Wonwoo in Jeonghan’s beginning. And it shall be no one but Wonwoo in the end, even when he knows he’s merely playing into Jeonghan’s scheme. excuse me? op? the audience wants to know the beginning??? excuse me? hello?

I'm also a big sucker for here's a name I reserve for you and we know its weight rolling off my tongue type of relationship so every time Jeonghan said wolf just think of me screaming. Mayhaps the croissant buffer has failed after all. I am spiralling into the abyss at Mach 6 speed.

I find it ironic how Jeonghan said he didn't desire kindness but it was the one thing Wonwoo gave him--the only kindness he's ever known when it comes down to it. How in his last moments, to show gratitude for what Wonwoo's about to do, comes the truth, even if its intention is to further guide Wonwoo's hands to end him. “You’ve been so good for me,” [velociraptor screeching]

It’s a name Wonwoo doesn’t want to hear, yet Jeonghan’s tears spilling down on him seizes any disdain in Wonwoo’s system. dude you know you are far gone when you envy a dead man who once touched what you loved the way you always wanted to touch them. :/ are you ok wonwoo

this was beautiful!!! everything I wanted!!!! thank you for writing *____* and the last tender place to sink your teeth in; is it wonwoo's heart TT___TT IS IT MINE????

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