OP… you’ve done it. i’m truly going to smooch u… i was smiling so dumbly throughout this whole thing bc like. YOU GET IT!!! YOU TRULY AND UTTERLY DO!!!! love when you’re young and a stinky lil preteen and have an equally stinky best friend named jeon wonwoo (who you have feelings for but this is neither here nor there) — love is exactly like this. you write soonyoung so well (and full of love) and there’s just so much history embedded in the way they interact with each other that reflect care and understanding.. the true essence of snwu lies in goose. i see.
all jokes aside. your characterization was wonderful and i enjoyed soonyoung’s inner monologue and thoughts, fraught with “he could never like me” *dramatic back of hand to forehead* and the description of him quite literally fighting his goose every single day — god, the leg hairs #LETWONWOOBEHAIRY — made me laugh so much. you brought them to life here, just two silly boys who i became endeared by and very invested in. thank you for this.
god the first section is honestly still my favorite part i just loved how you wrote being in love but also aware of how icky it is bc that’s your best friend!!! but also, it’s your best friend and that’s what it is!! soonyoung is so incredibly soonyoung in here and it’s so lovely.
Sometimes—and this is the worst part—Wonwoo holds Soonyoung's hand and doesn't even seem to notice when Soonyoung's heart pounds so hard that his palms grow slick with sweat. Wonwoo never pulls away or think he's gross.
Re: [FILL] fowl play (3/3)
all jokes aside. your characterization was wonderful and i enjoyed soonyoung’s inner monologue and thoughts, fraught with “he could never like me” *dramatic back of hand to forehead* and the description of him quite literally fighting his goose every single day — god, the leg hairs #LETWONWOOBEHAIRY — made me laugh so much. you brought them to life here, just two silly boys who i became endeared by and very invested in. thank you for this.
god the first section is honestly still my favorite part i just loved how you wrote being in love but also aware of how icky it is bc that’s your best friend!!! but also, it’s your best friend and that’s what it is!! soonyoung is so incredibly soonyoung in here and it’s so lovely.
Sometimes—and this is the worst part—Wonwoo holds Soonyoung's hand and doesn't even seem to notice when Soonyoung's heart pounds so hard that his palms grow slick with sweat. Wonwoo never pulls away or think he's gross.