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pamantha ([personal profile] pamantha) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-17 07:58 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] halcyon days

ah, this was so good!! I love this little snapshoot of their lives. The beginning did such a good job setting the scene with the arrow, slipping from the blood. And I loved the contrast you showed between Jeonghan and Seungcheol's characters, especially this aspect of Jeonghan: Jeonghan cares about everyone so much it hurts him the most when something unfortunate happens. Ahhhhh what a good character beat... And then the end, the softness of it despite the world they live in. There garden, their boys, the only reasons to keep going... If they ignore the undead just outside their fences, it's almost nice. ;; I really enjoyed reading this!

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