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greycheonsa ([personal profile] greycheonsa) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-09 10:29 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] are any of us ever truly alone?

!! oh this was so good, to get a glimpse into jun's head - i've always found him incredibly hard to write (so i just. don't lol) but the way you capture how he finds it so difficult to fit in (he's flighty! that feels so apt) compared to seemingly immovable, steady, secure minghao felt so right.

Sometimes it felt like an unspoken victory, when Junhui was able to annoy Minghao, just to see if he could get a reaction out of him. [...] They returned to their respective universes without saying another word. Minghao stayed in the room and Junhui dialed down the volume just a bit. two people existing in the same space but on entirely different planes of existence... idk why i love this so much.

junhao have such an interesting relationship (the "marriage of convenience" is a v good descriptor) because they definitely "had to" get close out of necessity and especially at the beginning they weren't super used to each others differences, but they've grown to appreciate each other in a different way!! i love how you ended it with junhui trying to look out for minghao, when previously he might've been more reliant on minghao to look after him.

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