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deadwine ([personal profile] deadwine) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-09 07:43 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] are any of us ever truly alone?

KARINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA WIFE IM HOWLING this is me being extremely selfish but also as a general public service too i hope you will write more idolverse, i cant believe this is you 'dipping your toes' into it please, i read this twice and now im ruing the lack of an ao3 floaty review box to scream your lines back at you.

He reminded Junhui of a tree. how could you do this, take a known quote about jun and flip it around like this, im rattling you...the sturdiness that people see in jun but he sees in hao and not in himself T____T

the way the narrative flows, how jun has to stifle what he thinks is flightiness and yet some part of him knows it's not right, "make him think a little carefully about what was being done to him – to them all" and then biting his tongue and getting on with it....jun acts of service are so personal and dear to me, though im not sure this counts as that exactly

A marriage of convenience, he joked, to which Minghao always rolled his eyes.

“Everything becomes convenient to you,” Minghao pointed out.

Junhui wondered if it was the same for Minghao. Minghao, who was infinitely more thoughtful than Junhui was, always so careful about everything that he did, so that in the end it looked like an act of deliberation instead of something he’d mindlessly just stumbled into.

Junhui caught himself before he asked the question. He didn’t know which answer was worse.


jun's practicality versus minghao's thoughtfulness......head in hands, this is my shit, this right here. of course jun would wonder whether it's deliberate for minghao and minghao would feel what goes, goes is how jun is looking at it!! UGHHH


and oh how you drew it to a close
“Do you think you’re going to try anything else?” Minghao asked, quietly. Junhui knew what he was really asking — will we have more time together? Will I see you on stage again?

Junhui took a while to craft his answer. “I don’t think so,” he mustered up brightly, but the end of his sentence came out stilted. “I think I’m done.”

Minghao became silent and Junhui smiled, folding him into a hug.

“It’s not the end of the world, Minghao. You know where to find me.”

Besides, Junhui knew: Minghao was different than he was.

He would make it


even till the end, the kind of unwavering steadiness he sees in minghao but actually he holds all that and more when it comes to believing in minghao and his potential and his future....im just a simple 8junist and canonverse fucker you have really given me everything for this prompt, thank you...put this on ao3 already so i can bookmark it hehe ily <3

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