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nitemareodyssey ([personal profile] nitemareodyssey) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-09 06:48 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] if my heart was a house / you'd be home

BRO. i love the way you went with this. wonhui was not the pairing i was expecting but it was perfect, it fit so well, junnie's exuberance tempered by exhaustion meeting wonu's introversion trumped by the thrill of his love being home. there are so many details of this i could pick out (the handwritten sign!!!!!! who handwrote it!!!!!!! enquiring minds need to know!!!!!!! and did they get confused while writing because of the big letters?????) so i'll just mention a few.

- going to wonu bc he can't Not. the pillow feeling wrong bc even though he picked it out for himself specially, and even tho presumably wonu is still using the ones that came with the bed, even tho he's drooled all over them and the stuffing is all gone, they are the only pillows that junhui can possibly sleep on
- wonu falling asleep with the lights on and his hand clamped around his phone like the horrid little goblin he is. junnie nagging him to sleep better. he won't god bless <3
- WONU CAT PAWING YOU AWAKE. my mother's cat likes to sit next to her on the bed Staring at her until she is presumably woken up by the instinctive fear provoked by two big yellow eyes fixed on her. she (the cat) does this at six am. i feel like (apart from the early morning) this is wonu.
- sleepy messy early morning sex. i think i will live in this image for the forseeable future. not that i'm struggling with my ldr haha :)))))

anyway! this was amazing and you really took the prompt and ran with it in such an interesting way and i'm so glad i left it so loose bc it gave an amazing writer like you space to go where you wanted. thank you so much for filling my prompt!

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