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klav ([personal profile] klav) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-06 03:41 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] All your cells want freedom

Wow, this gave me chills. It’s beautiful. Your descriptions of Minghao and Soonyoung get so much across so succinctly - their humanity, their complexity, their passion. The sea is given an incredible weight in this story too… I got such an amazing and complicated sense of awe/fear/respect/recognition which I LOVED. These lines in particular: The first time Minghao saw a storm up close, it felt like he was inside his own heart. + There’s an intimacy in the witness; in watching an outstretched hand grasp at nothing. In knowing what someone looks like when every part of them is fighting for survival. …seriously, beautiful. I teared up. Thank you so much for sharing this!!

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