right from the get-go "it burned hot and fast" EXTREMELY vivid and fucked
vernon not knowing how to deal with any of it -- his own grief or seungcheol's -- felt super realistic and of course incredibly awful, the way he's like playing catch-up to seungcheol's feelings, kind of??? vernon isn't the kind of person to have an immediate emotional response and you translated that so well here.
seungcheol apologizing for not going back, knowing what that would have meant.... OOF. OOF OOF OOF. the way it took vernon a second to get it bc he doesn't have the same thought processes... ANOTHER HARD OOF. seungkwan's last message to vernon being "ok" and a heart.... wretched !
this was so brutal and difficult to read but executed so, so well. you're so good at this ♡
Re: [FILL] may it rise to meet your feet
right from the get-go "it burned hot and fast" EXTREMELY vivid and fucked
vernon not knowing how to deal with any of it -- his own grief or seungcheol's -- felt super realistic and of course incredibly awful, the way he's like playing catch-up to seungcheol's feelings, kind of??? vernon isn't the kind of person to have an immediate emotional response and you translated that so well here.
seungcheol apologizing for not going back, knowing what that would have meant.... OOF. OOF OOF OOF. the way it took vernon a second to get it bc he doesn't have the same thought processes... ANOTHER HARD OOF. seungkwan's last message to vernon being "ok" and a heart.... wretched !
this was so brutal and difficult to read but executed so, so well. you're so good at this ♡