hi hello oh my god????? this is SO GOOD............ im literally on the floor my seokhao heart ;__;
i love love love the pacing of this, i also love minghao's sentience irt his reincarnation cycles ("He thinks, in his next life, he might like to build something here. Something that he can come back to.
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In Minghao’s thirteenth life, he builds a house with his own two hands."). also can we pls talk abt how u described seokhao's meeting in hao's sixteenth life? that had me swooning like ik id fall for seokmin Immediately if i was face to face w that. ur description of him is so romantic its jussssttttt!!!
im also simply and utterly in love with this part:
“Nowhere,” he says, eager and puppyish, the words practically tripping over themselves as they exit his mouth, “I’ve got nowhere else to be but here.”
Minghao nods, suddenly shy. “I'm Xu Minghao,” he introduces himself with a short bow.
“Lee Seokmin,” Seokmin replies, bowing sharply at the waist. When he rises and Minghao sees his face again—smiling, of course, always looking up at him and smiling, just like in his dreams—he feels something click decisively into place. “It’s so good to see you again.”
it makes me burst into this goofy ass smile and like srsly, props to u. i genuinely love this so much tysm for responding to my prompt, i will be reading this for the 100000th time. ♡
Re: don't you go leaving me / you still got a life to go
i love love love the pacing of this, i also love minghao's sentience irt his reincarnation cycles ("He thinks, in his next life, he might like to build something here. Something that he can come back to.
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In Minghao’s thirteenth life, he builds a house with his own two hands."). also can we pls talk abt how u described seokhao's meeting in hao's sixteenth life? that had me swooning like ik id fall for seokmin Immediately if i was face to face w that. ur description of him is so romantic its jussssttttt!!!
im also simply and utterly in love with this part:
“Nowhere,” he says, eager and puppyish, the words practically tripping over themselves as they exit his mouth, “I’ve got nowhere else to be but here.”
Minghao nods, suddenly shy. “I'm Xu Minghao,” he introduces himself with a short bow.
“Lee Seokmin,” Seokmin replies, bowing sharply at the waist. When he rises and Minghao sees his face again—smiling, of course, always looking up at him and smiling, just like in his dreams—he feels something click decisively into place. “It’s so good to see you again.”
it makes me burst into this goofy ass smile and like srsly, props to u. i genuinely love this so much tysm for responding to my prompt, i will be reading this for the 100000th time. ♡