ahhhhh something about the plainness of "I want you with me too" really got me!!! idk there is something really honest about the two of them, i guess maybe because when you can see the bad parts it feels like you are really seeing everything. i love the concept of seokmin trying to be kind and offer forgiveness by offering the oranges, but still holding some of that sourness inside of him -- it felt very him! the way they care for each other so much and will take care of each other without question, even if they're kinda pissed about it... maybe it's not ideal but there is something romantic about the raw unpleasantness i think!! anyway i really really liked this so much, thank you for sharing it with us!!!!! ♡♡♡
Re: [FILL] we'll try again