SECOND OF ALL it is killing me that you were like "idk anything about wonwoo or chan" and yet your wonwoo and chan are perfectly characterized to a degree i could never hope to reach
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Being alone doesn’t bother Wonwoo, but it does make him want things in a way he didn’t before. That was something Mingyu had often complained about - he never initiated much, he didn’t think to reach out and take Mingyu’s hand while they walked. He does now. The skin under Chan’s eyes is so dark it’s almost bruised, and Wonwoo thinks about laying his thumb there. ummmm???? THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS HERE, the way wonwoo didn't want it with mingyu because mingyu pushed too hard and made it too easy, the way he's fine being alone but it makes him think about other people's company differently, WANTING TO DELICATELY TOUCH THE SKIN UNDER CHAN'S EYES.... christ. and the way chan is literally just chewing his dinner thru this entire emotional journey with no idea of what is happening... my god, your brain!!!
i love love loved the description of chan too, about how he was too serious and never got when people made jokes about him, but also funny and kind to wonwoo!! they are little buddies :( i hope neither of them are gonna die :((((
also i personally think that the best horror is when you have the vague sense of unease slash building anxiety that something horrible is going to happen and let me just say, u def nailed that one. WHY DOES IT SMELL LIKE DIRT. CHAN WHAT DID U FID. CHAN MAYBE U SHOULD HAVE TOLD SOMEONE BABE I RLY THINK MAYBE U SHOULD HAVE DONE THAT.
i am sure this will be revisiting me in the future so thank u for that!!!! :) BUT REALLY THO you are very very good and i love you, and i'm so glad you are sharing your wonderful ideas with us like this!!!!!!!
Re: [FILL] and the wind will be my hands
SECOND OF ALL it is killing me that you were like "idk anything about wonwoo or chan" and yet your wonwoo and chan are perfectly characterized to a degree i could never hope to reach
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Being alone doesn’t bother Wonwoo, but it does make him want things in a way he didn’t before. That was something Mingyu had often complained about - he never initiated much, he didn’t think to reach out and take Mingyu’s hand while they walked. He does now. The skin under Chan’s eyes is so dark it’s almost bruised, and Wonwoo thinks about laying his thumb there. ummmm???? THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS HERE, the way wonwoo didn't want it with mingyu because mingyu pushed too hard and made it too easy, the way he's fine being alone but it makes him think about other people's company differently, WANTING TO DELICATELY TOUCH THE SKIN UNDER CHAN'S EYES.... christ. and the way chan is literally just chewing his dinner thru this entire emotional journey with no idea of what is happening... my god, your brain!!!
i love love loved the description of chan too, about how he was too serious and never got when people made jokes about him, but also funny and kind to wonwoo!! they are little buddies :( i hope neither of them are gonna die :((((
also i personally think that the best horror is when you have the vague sense of unease slash building anxiety that something horrible is going to happen and let me just say, u def nailed that one. WHY DOES IT SMELL LIKE DIRT. CHAN WHAT DID U FID. CHAN MAYBE U SHOULD HAVE TOLD SOMEONE BABE I RLY THINK MAYBE U SHOULD HAVE DONE THAT.
i am sure this will be revisiting me in the future so thank u for that!!!! :) BUT REALLY THO you are very very good and i love you, and i'm so glad you are sharing your wonderful ideas with us like this!!!!!!!