ki *______* this is such a fun triangle and i love the nuances you built into it. i think my favorite thing out of many favorite things is just minghao watching wwjn. he's so MEAN to ww at first and i love it. i love wonwoo who's continuously shocked that someone finds him interesting, minghao who's probably resentful that jun is taking interest in someone else. Wonwoo was acutely aware of Minghao a few feet away, standing there and pretending he wasn’t listening. and as local girl who's obsessed with how others perceive her and her relationships this was soooo good and perfect. and i love how you can see the minghao melissa jun nick wonwoo frances it's just caught so well the complexity of those relationships and still, the want in them all.

He reminded Wonwoo of one of the conventions of playwriting. It’s more interesting to watch someone try not to fall apart than to watch them fall apart. i also think how you put in things like this is so cool, it really feels like you have such a good understanding of story conventions and writing techniques and it adds a meta element that almost highlights why exactly your writing is so good LOL. thank you for the treat <3