hi oh my GOD im the person who prompted and lemme tell u, this literally... made my entire mf day???? the moment i saw "soonhao" and "in the soop" i alr knew which moment it is and nearly had a stroke ngl.

so this is utterly beautiful and written so well to the point where it just feels. like it just feels. the dialogue is spread in such a soft & intense way and u rly nailed the way i envisioned that conversation to go so i'm just. so impressed. and so happy. like so so so happy. on another note, i absolutely love ur prose and pacing! everything is amazingly done, from first word to the last.

soonhao are also so so so soft and so lovely and it just makes my heart positively ache q__q ♡

i esp loved reading: "Soonyoung's wandering fingers play with the hem of Minghao's shirt and give him goosebumps. "Try," Soonyoung says, his voice encouraging and full of expectation. Minghao swallows, feeling the lump in his throat nudge up against his words. Soonyoung is looking at him intensely, but it's still soft and gentle and Minghao feels safe. Always has, with him.

"As best you can."

Soonyoung's fingers brush against the skin of his hip. Minghao's body burns

"Even just one line."

Soonyoung's fingers spark against his ribs.

So he tries. He scans the page for a line that seems easy, where the characters stay put and don't move when he tries to read them." this is what i meant by the spaced out dialogue!! this is so well done and the imagery is so clear. i feel like u nailed soonhao's dynamics jus in this part liiiiikeee ;__; ♡!!!

thank u so much for picking this up i love this so much my god