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aranak ([personal profile] aranak) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-03 11:11 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] worse than knowing

literally wtf... it's midnight in my time zone you're not allowed to make me sad!!! i WILL cry!!! >:[
seriously the "she's in the lake" repetition is so haunting, it ties the piece together so well!!

Jun goes to the lake. The water is warmer than she thought it would be. It feels like a hug. also wtf... you're SO GOOD at giving a new dimension (new meaning almost?) to words within the context of a pov... HOW (+ all the little qips feel so!! jun!!)

Jun knows this in her bones, in the callouses on her feet from a summer gone barefoot down at the coast when they were 16 and barely had hips when they... barely had hips... i can't believe you've done this to them... i loved loved loved this

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