Someone wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-03 04:26 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] deepest, desperate downfall

oh my godddddddddd this actually made my pulse start to pick up with anxiety, jesus christ you did such a great job of capturing the desperation and atmosphere of this situation, and like the total misery of surviving in the capitol. Like these are words that are used a lot in love stories but it REALLY DID feel like seungkwan was the only reason vernon was still trying, and vernon was the only spot of joy in seungkwan's life??? god the fact that you made the brutality and cruelty of the games feel fresh to me also made the rebellion feel fresh and exciting to even though like, OF COURSE vernon is going to join the rebellion OF COURSE. anyway I'm really happy to know that in the unwritten part of this they both live happily ever after, that is great, that is good news, really happy about that mmhmmmmmmmm :) - robin/bapilli

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