KARINA I LOVE THIS SO MUCH IM GONNA DIE ;;;;; you know slice of life is my favourite.... and the quote you used for the title is ALSO my favourite........ they want each other to eat well!! they butt heads and they're so stubborn and they can't always talk about it but they care for each other too!!! i love that you showed this cycle without making it bleak, like the love was just as clear as the frustration so as a reader i genuinely want them to work it out and also genuinely believe that they can. and i really really REALLY loved the emphasis on helping each other/doing things for each other as a love language and also physical touch, bc i think that's so them!! i tried to choose favourite parts and it was like. the entire thing. but here are some FAVOURITE favourite parts.
They sit in begrudging silence for the rest of dinner. Shoulder to shoulder. Close enough that their thighs touch, elbows jostling into each other every time Seokmin or Mingyu take a sip of their soup. Even if it is by accident — or more likely, on purpose — they let the warmth of their bodies bleed into one another. To reassure the other person that they’re still there. That they’re not going anywhere. TWO DOGS IN TIME OUT... they're still mad at each other but if they can't feel the other person next to them they'll get upset >:(
He wordlessly presents them to Mingyu when he’s done, who takes them with soapy hands and a quiet mouth. mingyu's quiet mouth ;;;;;;;;;; mouse face.... ;;;;
Mingyu will jostle Seokmin’s shoulder and then pull him closer, tight, as if he couldn’t bear the thought of being apart any longer, clinging onto him for the rest of the night. EXTREMELY mingyu. big ol arms pulling seokmin tight! that's what mingyus do best!!
also the details about mingyu getting picky about the broth, seokmin asking mingyu for help and mingyu sighing but always helping him, the way they're both doing it to spare the other's (or their own) pride... everything was so perfect :( and of course the ending!!!! he made it for him :( he loves him :((( they're the same :((((
thank you so much for filling this prompt so wonderfully, i'm gonna reread it so many times!!! love you ♡♡♡
Re: [FILL] i want us to eat well
They sit in begrudging silence for the rest of dinner. Shoulder to shoulder. Close enough that their thighs touch, elbows jostling into each other every time Seokmin or Mingyu take a sip of their soup. Even if it is by accident — or more likely, on purpose — they let the warmth of their bodies bleed into one another. To reassure the other person that they’re still there. That they’re not going anywhere. TWO DOGS IN TIME OUT... they're still mad at each other but if they can't feel the other person next to them they'll get upset >:(
He wordlessly presents them to Mingyu when he’s done, who takes them with soapy hands and a quiet mouth. mingyu's quiet mouth ;;;;;;;;;; mouse face.... ;;;;
Mingyu will jostle Seokmin’s shoulder and then pull him closer, tight, as if he couldn’t bear the thought of being apart any longer, clinging onto him for the rest of the night. EXTREMELY mingyu. big ol arms pulling seokmin tight! that's what mingyus do best!!
also the details about mingyu getting picky about the broth, seokmin asking mingyu for help and mingyu sighing but always helping him, the way they're both doing it to spare the other's (or their own) pride... everything was so perfect :( and of course the ending!!!! he made it for him :( he loves him :((( they're the same :((((
thank you so much for filling this prompt so wonderfully, i'm gonna reread it so many times!!! love you ♡♡♡