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pamantha ([personal profile] pamantha) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-02 02:37 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] a whisper in the breeze

SCREAMS!! WTF!! Ah this is so unique and sharp and well done, the horror here was a perfect mix of solid worldbuilding and gauzy unknown. I love how you ramped up to the violence, starting soft but uneasy and then accelerating to the awful, this is so good!! I'm obsessed!! This whole section: It’s always someone else, a friend of a friend of a friend. Somebody else’s horror story. A mother goes to sleep and wakes up as someone else and decides that now is a good time as ever to invest in cutlery. Knives are sharp and plenty in the kitchen. || You can see where this is going, don’t you? SO GOOD AND SHARP, and then Josh's mantra: I am not here. I am not here. I am not here. This was so much fun to read, such a ride, the horror and construction is so wellcrafted, thank you so much for sharing!!

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