“I figured,” Minghao says, not unkindly """NOT UNKINDLY""" i'm gonna scream! the hint of condescension here is so delicious. the way minghao is perfectly comfortable and that's what makes josh LESS comfortable because he can't get the upper hand... also delicious!!!
and then there are so many little things that made me feel absolutely insane... “I don’t want you to ask me” and minghao's reaction, the implication that josh usually checks out completely while having sex and this is the first time he hasn't done that, the way he can't figure out what minghao wants from him and can't figure out it's because minghao doesn't actually want something from him at all... minghao giving him a way to say what he wants without saying it... it's all so good and you got so much into such a small snippet, i'm so impressed!! and just in general i like your writing style, it's very clean and you show everything so straightforwardly which i really love.
thank u for filling my prompt so perfectly *ଘ(੭*ˊᵕˋ)੭* ੈ i've reread this like six times already today and i KNOW i will be back!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: [FILL] earth eats away at itself
“I figured,” Minghao says, not unkindly """NOT UNKINDLY""" i'm gonna scream! the hint of condescension here is so delicious. the way minghao is perfectly comfortable and that's what makes josh LESS comfortable because he can't get the upper hand... also delicious!!!
and then there are so many little things that made me feel absolutely insane... “I don’t want you to ask me” and minghao's reaction, the implication that josh usually checks out completely while having sex and this is the first time he hasn't done that, the way he can't figure out what minghao wants from him and can't figure out it's because minghao doesn't actually want something from him at all... minghao giving him a way to say what he wants without saying it... it's all so good and you got so much into such a small snippet, i'm so impressed!! and just in general i like your writing style, it's very clean and you show everything so straightforwardly which i really love.
thank u for filling my prompt so perfectly *ଘ(੭*ˊᵕˋ)੭* ੈ i've reread this like six times already today and i KNOW i will be back!!!!!!!!!!!!