ohhhh OHHHHHH the part where the tension buulds and they’re just mean to each other (but out of love) and their gaze cuts to hansol’s chair only to see the back of it???? absolute chills…
im not at all familiar with the source material but the grief and the misery that is in here is beautifully done. and even though hansol is dead the way that you write him from chan’s memory — he is undeniably alive… which tugged at my heartstrings soooo much :(( the world/character building that you’ve done is also just so rich here aHHHH my fave line: Now, Hansol’s just a point in time. This ghost sitting in between before and after, at a middle ground that Seungkwan and Chan can’t reach.
Re: [FILL] empty chairs at empty tables
im not at all familiar with the source material but the grief and the misery that is in here is beautifully done. and even though hansol is dead the way that you write him from chan’s memory — he is undeniably alive… which tugged at my heartstrings soooo much :(( the world/character building that you’ve done is also just so rich here aHHHH my fave line: Now, Hansol’s just a point in time. This ghost sitting in between before and after, at a middle ground that Seungkwan and Chan can’t reach.
THANK YOU FOR WRITING!!!! HAPPY NEW YEARS