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klav ([personal profile] klav) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-01-01 01:30 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] out of the woods

Oh my god this is DELIGHTFULLY terrifying. I was tense the whole time, starting really from Wonwoo’s face doesn’t flicker. It remains still. Smooth. Like a rancid, forest pond. “I never forgot you, hyung.” !! His face smooth like a rancid forest pond, WOW. Your descriptions work so well here to show there’s something Very Off about the situation but also how Seungcheol can’t really accept/acknowledge that because he’s so torn up by memory and grief.

and HOLY SHIT that kiss! The teeth!! I love that moment, the startling twist, the wrongness of the whole thing. So freaky and cool. Thank you soooo much I love what you did with this prompt!!

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