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klav ([personal profile] klav) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-12-31 03:21 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] when you are, where i am

Oh OUCH this is lovely and so so sad!! My heart was in my throat the entire time, trying to imagine what it would be like for Minghao in the wake of Mingyu's disappearance... just wow. I love the way you told this in short snapshots, it feels really rich and developed. My favorite line is probably “I always wanted to come back here with you,” Mingyu sounds wistful. - !!!! Would read a million words in this universe, thank you so much!

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