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pamantha ([personal profile] pamantha) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-12-29 03:14 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] don't you hate it when you love someone

This is so good, ah, I am in love with how you use Seungcheol friendship to unpeel the soonhoon and how you wrote Jihoon's selfexpression: thru lyrics, squeezed out of him by Seungcheol. The bit about Soonyoung helping Jihoon with ruby, the lyrics in the notebook, the cute texts, all of it contrasted by the unrevealed breakdown, this is so compelling!! A whole spread dedicated to the reasons why they didn't work out - we're too stubborn, we're too similar, we don't know how to ask for what we want. JIHOON U FOOL. I really loved reading this!!!

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