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pamantha ([personal profile] pamantha) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-12-28 05:38 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] coming home to you

Ah this was so soft and lovely, your imagery was beautiful, this line especially knocked my knees out from under me: Instead he leans his head against the window and watches the streetlights stream past outside, looking like dashes of shooting stars. Minghao closes his eyes and wishes for courage. It’s such a good line and you had so many here, I really loved your descriptions, like Seungcheol’s hacking laugh, and then the gyuhao!!! The ending!! This was such a good read!

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