oh dear I am compromised! I loved the tone of the fic, it look me out of my chair into a californian summer. There's something special and invincible about road trips and I felt that here with seokhao through all the small details like late lunches when the day gets away from you, feet sneaking through sand, summer on your cheek.

lines I loved:
It feels a little like devotion, like love right on the tip of the tongue. - I'm old and disillusioned but this line literally makes me want to fall in love

He doesn’t think he would ever tire of this, of the privilege of drying Seokmin’s hair after showers and rain - sobbing, the calling an act of love a /privilege/ makes me want to knit this quote into a sweater

Minghao feels as if the ocean itself is swallowing him whole with the depth of his wanting - (silent screaming)