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klav ([personal profile] klav) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-12-28 04:20 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] Our Temporary Flame

Holy shit, this is amazing. It's so rare to see first person in fic and your take on it is SO EXCELLENT here!! You really get into Jeonghan's headspace in a way that invites in the reader. It's intense, it's personal, it's evocative. There are so many lines here I absolutely love. We passed a flat bottle of Hong Thong whiskey back and forth until we emptied it and our mouths hurt from all the biting and sucking and then we fucked that night too. Fucked like dogs in heat in his friend’s bed. God wow!! Your prose is gorgeous and I loved the specificity in this, particularly the mapping of Bangkok. I could read a million words in this universe. Thank you so so much!!

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