i saw this at w*rk today and had to wait all day to sit and Really Look at it. well i am here now and, and i am seriously losing it.
- Grown into the full maturity of his features and yet somehow still as boyishly charming as ever. i love how observant wonwoo is here - the description of soju not dulling mingyu's acuity, it's a lens that is tailored to Knowing its subject. no one else could describe kmg the way jww could. - the almost coincidence timing of never meeting there till that day despite being right next to each other is so movie-like - Sometimes the most inherently unromantic things can be romantic in their own right. op how do you get it so much. sidenote that i meant to leave for the end but this piece uses rain /so/ well. rain as a setting, rain as a common thread between two moments and all the associations of it with that tinge of sadness and romance. this is seriously all i could have asked for from this prompt and i think you are amazing. - “I— I do, yeah,” says Mingyu, after a beat. “You still remember?” / Wonwoo doesn’t answer that. seriously like it is getting me so bad that wonwoo remembers everything and cares so much. that he's SO considerate. that mingyu can't accept not because he doesn't want the kindness but just because he cares about wonwoo that much too, that neither can accept comfort when they know the other person will have it worse. the way: Instead he—hesitating only for a moment—takes Mingyu’s hands in his own and folds them around the money, holding firm even as he can feel Mingyu jolt under his touch. that wonwoo uses his love as a weapon and gets his way but ultimately for mingyu's own benefit. i'm dyeing!! - “Let me send you home,” says Wonwoo. “One last time.” as soon as i read this line for the first time i knew what direction you were going in. this is such a good line, so charged with history T___T & - Because I thought it’d be nice, Wonwoo wanted to say. Because I wanted to eat with you today, and tomorrow, and every day after that. because he's not breaking up with him because he doesn't love mg and i love how you convey this so clearly in his narration. and i love that take on mw because it's really so tender AND I LOVE THEM. i want them to be happy, and even if they're not together it really is just so. to know that they care still. - “I forgot my umbrella,” said Mingyu, curt. “I asked my mom to bring it for me.” / “I have mine.” / “Good for you.” mingyu almost petulant in his hurt but wonwoo STILL CARES SO MUCH!!!! so much that he's desperate for mg to take it - “You’ll get sick. You always get sick so easily.” again with the Knowing - Most of the time, Wonwoo tried his best not to be selfish. But just this once he wanted to be, just one more time. (heartbreak emoji) i'm deceased. op thank you sooooo much for this i think you are incredible and i won't be able to stop thinking about this.
Re: [FILL] just as usual
- Grown into the full maturity of his features and yet somehow still as boyishly charming as ever. i love how observant wonwoo is here - the description of soju not dulling mingyu's acuity, it's a lens that is tailored to Knowing its subject. no one else could describe kmg the way jww could.
- the almost coincidence timing of never meeting there till that day despite being right next to each other is so movie-like
- Sometimes the most inherently unromantic things can be romantic in their own right. op how do you get it so much. sidenote that i meant to leave for the end but this piece uses rain /so/ well. rain as a setting, rain as a common thread between two moments and all the associations of it with that tinge of sadness and romance. this is seriously all i could have asked for from this prompt and i think you are amazing.
- “I— I do, yeah,” says Mingyu, after a beat. “You still remember?” / Wonwoo doesn’t answer that. seriously like it is getting me so bad that wonwoo remembers everything and cares so much. that he's SO considerate. that mingyu can't accept not because he doesn't want the kindness but just because he cares about wonwoo that much too, that neither can accept comfort when they know the other person will have it worse. the way: Instead he—hesitating only for a moment—takes Mingyu’s hands in his own and folds them around the money, holding firm even as he can feel Mingyu jolt under his touch. that wonwoo uses his love as a weapon and gets his way but ultimately for mingyu's own benefit. i'm dyeing!!
- “Let me send you home,” says Wonwoo. “One last time.” as soon as i read this line for the first time i knew what direction you were going in. this is such a good line, so charged with history T___T
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- Because I thought it’d be nice, Wonwoo wanted to say. Because I wanted to eat with you today, and tomorrow, and every day after that. because he's not breaking up with him because he doesn't love mg and i love how you convey this so clearly in his narration. and i love that take on mw because it's really so tender AND I LOVE THEM. i want them to be happy, and even if they're not together it really is just so. to know that they care still.
- “I forgot my umbrella,” said Mingyu, curt. “I asked my mom to bring it for me.” / “I have mine.” / “Good for you.” mingyu almost petulant in his hurt but wonwoo STILL CARES SO MUCH!!!! so much that he's desperate for mg to take it
- “You’ll get sick. You always get sick so easily.” again with the Knowing
- Most of the time, Wonwoo tried his best not to be selfish. But just this once he wanted to be, just one more time. (heartbreak emoji) i'm deceased. op thank you sooooo much for this i think you are incredible and i won't be able to stop thinking about this.