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deadwine ([personal profile] deadwine) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-01-24 06:32 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] bury us alive

oooh you really took your own bait haha i'm glad you're writing the things you want to read haha. so obviously i dont go here or know the lore but this was such a thrill to read, the visual descriptions of the scene of war, the way you heighten that feeling of threat with the stray risen right in the middle of dialogue! so good! chan and seungkwan would choose a life and death situation as the setup to bicker back and forth wouldn't day? their dynamic really carried me through it, thank you for sharing!<3

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