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hui ([personal profile] luvisms) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-01-24 03:57 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] home is an extension of the body

KARINA T___T u are so lovely ive been staring at this comment since u left it u have no idea how much ur feedback means 2 me <333 im super relieved u thought the grief was handled well in this, i've never really explored the topic of death in writing before so i was undoubtedly very nervous about broaching the topic for the first time, so thank u for this!!

- AH i did want 2 play w survivor's guilt a little bit but i was worried abt making it too heavyhanded so i just tried 2 Imply it... v happy it came thru a little!
- youve hooked me onto 218 bros i adore them <3___<3
- thank u for picking out those lines!! all 3 of these i kinda had to Sit there and rewrite a couple times and squint at it to see if it was properly saying what i wanted it to say so i am glad they hit

thank u so much for reading and leaving such a kind comment, i'm really happy you liked this <3

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