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deadwine ([personal profile] deadwine) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-01-23 02:24 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] home is an extension of the body

HI. i am a big, big sucker for the way you write loss in this one-- the obvious one, the shared hurt between Soonyoung and Hansol as well as physical, the bits you pepper in of what movement means to Hansol in the post-accident world. also what the collateral of losing a team-mate who is also your home! losing an actual physical reality of home and the possibility of a future!
i don't know the source but your world-building is so clever in this, through Soonyoung's story about Wonwoo and Vernon's about Seungkwan as well as Vernon's POV of Soonyoung initially. I love the solace soonsol find in each other, how their scenes are painful but not as acute as i expected them to be- tempered by the other's company. aah thank you so much for this!

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