ki!! thank u for picking out that line that's actually one of the first ones that came 2 me so i def tried 2 build part of the scene around it... ahh i love that u describe it as floating in the deep end i think abt that kind of feeling a lot so im very happy if this could evoke it even a little. LOL honestly i think i kinda did have mariya's pacrim floating around in the back of my head while writing this... hoping i didnt accidentally rip it off but if it parallels nicely i will be happy. thank u sm for reading <3