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hui ([personal profile] luvisms) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-01-21 11:12 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] looking through a dusty window pane

MAN i cant believe i tried to get u with the prompt and then u ended up getting me with the fill??? i adore the way this is structured w the lines from the movie preluding each section and youve managed to capture the movie's atmosphere so perfectly!! it's amazing how much youve allowed us to see into their heads and feel what they must b feeling w/o ever really outright stating it explicitly #___#

> i really liked He pressed himself back against the doorjamb when Mingyu turned to leave like he was fighting against a magnetic pull. Their arms brushed over the threshold of the dining room. missed connections translating into physicality??? my brain is going a little haywire??
> and then He expressed his love in his own reaching desperate way. KIM MINGYU ACTS OF SERVICE???? absolutely catatonic i cant believe youve done this to me
> He didn’t look at Mingyu, and he didn’t try to read all the things behind Mingyu’s face. The things that Mingyu might whisper into a ruined temple wall six years later, cover the breach with mud, hide away the one true thing that had slipped through their fingers like their own shadows. IM UNHINGED!!! ur prose is so stunningly gorgeous i know i say this a lot but its true... it rlly pulls everything u have going on here into this super tight cohesive narrative and im always so impressed by how much u can say without using that many words at all. thank u so much for writing this!!

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