DID SOMEBODY SAY OIKAWA JEONGHAN??? OK IM HERE. let me go straight to the part I LOVE THE MOST: Time passes and Jeonghan says, “You have freckles now.”
SJDSJDHJSADHJADJASHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OHHHH THIS LINE JUST. BLEW ME AWAY. how they were so close that yjh could see this detail in his face. oh wow. and the little details! the visor! seungkwan nagging! and jeonghan whining he doesnt look cute! this is such a unique pairing but u write them so well! and also the oikawa/hinata dynamics too, its also very palpable here! the grand king reference!!!! the game they lost to the two locals (i forgot the nickname they have but i remember the chapter where they had to buy them beer or something??) >__< aahhhhhhh i have never imagined seungkwan as hinata (though i shouldve! i shoulve!) so thank you for putting this in my head i will forever now trasure it....
and the last scene: Seungkwan laughs, loud and ugly and absolutely irreverent. His skin rendered gold by the sun setting. “What do you mean there isn’t volleyball? What kind of world would that be?” --the contrast in the description of his laugh as ugly and the stunning imagery of brazil's sunset. only jeonghan can think that. and then the last line: This one, this part of Seungkwan, Jeonghan had also forgotten, and he's grateful to bask in it right now and to remember.
OH THAT'S SO ABSOLUTELY OIKAWA AND JEONGHAN AND SEUNGKWAN AND HINATA. i dont rly know how else to say it but you captured them both so well here dear writer... and i will be thinking about this for so long. i wish i prompted this myself so i can claim this fill as being for ME but dang. just. thank you. this was so lovely and tender and im smiling as i write this. <<<333333
Re: [FILL] fishing the sun out of the sky
SJDSJDHJSADHJADJASHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OHHHH THIS LINE JUST. BLEW ME AWAY. how they were so close that yjh could see this detail in his face. oh wow. and the little details! the visor! seungkwan nagging! and jeonghan whining he doesnt look cute! this is such a unique pairing but u write them so well! and also the oikawa/hinata dynamics too, its also very palpable here! the grand king reference!!!! the game they lost to the two locals (i forgot the nickname they have but i remember the chapter where they had to buy them beer or something??) >__< aahhhhhhh i have never imagined seungkwan as hinata (though i shouldve! i shoulve!) so thank you for putting this in my head i will forever now trasure it....
and the last scene: Seungkwan laughs, loud and ugly and absolutely irreverent. His skin rendered gold by the sun setting. “What do you mean there isn’t volleyball? What kind of world would that be?” --the contrast in the description of his laugh as ugly and the stunning imagery of brazil's sunset. only jeonghan can think that. and then the last line: This one, this part of Seungkwan, Jeonghan had also forgotten, and he's grateful to bask in it right now and to remember.
OH THAT'S SO ABSOLUTELY OIKAWA AND JEONGHAN AND SEUNGKWAN AND HINATA. i dont rly know how else to say it but you captured them both so well here dear writer... and i will be thinking about this for so long. i wish i prompted this myself so i can claim this fill as being for ME but dang. just. thank you. this was so lovely and tender and im smiling as i write this. <<<333333