ki. ur absolutely insane. this is so good. i know i say this a lot but i think the world of u and ur writing. i think ur brain is so sexy and i could shower u in love 24/7 bc u deserve, bc ur a genius!!!!!! the prose here is so amazing, nd u portray this manic stream of consciousness / desperation / passion / “i want it so bad im on the brink of ruin” so well im so stunned. it was so beautifully and hauntingly written that i know i’ll be coming back to look at this later . for probably ages honestly.
i don’t rly know anything about black swan but having 8jun in this environment set me alight. they suited this so well (also the my i parallels ARE SO BRILLIANT), minghao’s perfectionism and the wrongness of his face vs junhui’s lightness and ease of the spotlight... just mwah... i think what i love most about ur writing are these 2nd person interruptions that are so ghastly and pack a punch.
(ie. “You’re terrified. How can you hide something like that?” and “ Even if— even if he wears it effortlessly, I had to work for it, I had to work myself to the bone and fucking tendons to become someone else. Doesn’t that mean I earned it more? Me? Me me me me me?” )
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i don’t rly know anything about black swan but having 8jun in this environment set me alight. they suited this so well (also the my i parallels ARE SO BRILLIANT), minghao’s perfectionism and the wrongness of his face vs junhui’s lightness and ease of the spotlight... just mwah... i think what i love most about ur writing are these 2nd person interruptions that are so ghastly and pack a punch.
(ie. “You’re terrified. How can you hide something like that?” and “ Even if— even if he wears it effortlessly, I had to work for it, I had to work myself to the bone and fucking tendons to become someone else. Doesn’t that mean I earned it more? Me? Me me me me me?” )
god. ive got chills ur so good!!!!!!