thank you i'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! i'm really glad that the unreliable narrator tag was helpful too! i hadn't thought of it initially but after rereading the final section i felt it was really necessary to clarify that ljh has no idea whats going on in ksy's brain haha...

i tried to look up the timothy liu lines when i was writing this but i couldn't figure out which poem it was, thank you for sharing!! i will look into reading those... i don't read a lot of poetry so i would love to start here :]