oh i love what you did with it!!Jihoon's canonical recalcitrance with Soonyoung, or what he chooses to show of it anyway is such a great thing to tap into but with the knowledge that he's an unreliable narrator here, every re-read reveals new ways of looking at them.
I love your Soonyoung! The bits of his character you have built through the details and backstory and through Jihoon, of course, are so so good. Like this: The funny thing about Kwon Soonyoung is that he often gives you answers without realizing it, oblivious to his own effects.

The lines are from Liu's Forty-Percent Chance of Rain! And the title is Anti-Love Poem by Mone Zote! Both lovely pieces!