oh wow the mitski song plus your wonderful writing...your characterization is so succinct and piercing ("“Ah, but here’s the thing,” Jeonghan said. “I took it from the housekeeping cart.”"!!! thats what i thought youd say yoon jeonghan)

every line in here has so much more behind it (which is of course the heart of the story) and your dialogue and seungcheol's interiority is so revealing and brilliant.... loved this so much!!