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klav ([personal profile] klav) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-01-10 06:23 pm (UTC)

Re: [Fill] : what could be more important than a little something to eat?

Ahhh how soft and lovely, I feel warmed by this character study of Mingyu!! Maybe, you think, if the food is utterly perfect, if it is warming and filling and soothing and helpful; maybe they'll know exactly how much you care for them. — this line melted my heart. The 2nd person POV is also done really well and I love how his thoughts are included, thanks for sharing!

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