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deadwine ([personal profile] deadwine) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-01-07 06:54 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] and if i didn’t know better

OKAY. WOW. I just am such a sucker for a sad seokmin, it is what is is and even more so a seokmin, burned out and down but just physically pushing himself to kindness..god you've written him so well here and watching him through your jeonghan is soo interesting, the knowledge he has, so early on, that this boy is different and he can undo him...this was so painfully good! these bits of characterisation you tucked in: like he’s not really used to asking for what he wants and for jeonghan: He just wants more time. AAH. thank you!!

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