YEAH I TEARED UP!! But I asked for that in my hell prompt so you did a perfect and fantastic job!!!
The way you write dk…. I am feeling so much pain (“like he’s not really used to asking for what he wants.”) especially in that initial bar scene where he tries to be Hardened but he is just. so full of emotions and soft and wonderful :(((( thats my Boy
Also, your yjh pov is amazing…that passage where he wonders what it would like to undo lsm is so interesting. This: “He both envies Seokmin and pities him. (He loves him even more for it.)” was incredible and told me so much about who he is, like what attracted him to lsm in the first place was also sort of the downfall of their relationship (familiarity breeds contempt etc), also him only believing in coincidences, not love or fate, and being so self-aware but being unable to change himself
The description of their fight kinda broke my heart and I love what u said in your author’s note and you wrote to my evil little prompt so so well. “Is love enough to keep us together” YEAH.. that was exactly what I was thinking when I prompted it, that the qualities that became emblematic of the problems in their relationship were what attracted them to each other in the first place...thank u so much for indulging my prompt u are amazing
Re: [FILL] and if i didn’t know better
The way you write dk…. I am feeling so much pain (“like he’s not really used to asking for what he wants.”) especially in that initial bar scene where he tries to be Hardened but he is just. so full of emotions and soft and wonderful :(((( thats my Boy
Also, your yjh pov is amazing…that passage where he wonders what it would like to undo lsm is so interesting. This: “He both envies Seokmin and pities him. (He loves him even more for it.)” was incredible and told me so much about who he is, like what attracted him to lsm in the first place was also sort of the downfall of their relationship (familiarity breeds contempt etc), also him only believing in coincidences, not love or fate, and being so self-aware but being unable to change himself
The description of their fight kinda broke my heart and I love what u said in your author’s note and you wrote to my evil little prompt so so well. “Is love enough to keep us together” YEAH.. that was exactly what I was thinking when I prompted it, that the qualities that became emblematic of the problems in their relationship were what attracted them to each other in the first place...thank u so much for indulging my prompt u are amazing