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klav ([personal profile] klav) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2021-01-05 12:54 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] the moon is a friend for the lonesome to talk to

Holy SHIITTTT this is so cool!! I'm not familiar with the source material but I'll absolutely be looking it up later. Your imagery is STUNNING I feel like I've been smacked with all these different themes of monsterhood, science fiction, love as waiting, etc. and it's beautiful.

When is a boy no longer a boy? When he grows up. When he becomes what he swore to destroy. - your style is gorgeous and these lines in particular made me feel !!! and I love how this ended ambiguously, with Minghao still waiting, and we don't know whether Junhui returns or burns. The ending line is really bittersweet (cut up into little stars oh my god what an IMAGEEEE) and satisfying. thank you so much for writing and sharing!!

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