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rainiest ([personal profile] rainiest) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2025-01-19 06:27 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] degrees of noise

i’ve never encountered the sentinel/guide au before now but omg what a compelling concept, and it makes so much sense mapped over soonhoon

Soonyoung's consciousness sprawls, predatory and unrelenting like invasive flora in an otherwise undisturbed forest.
oh lets goooo this and your description that follows of jihoon suddenly being plunged into soonyoung’s sensory view are so good n vivid, i can viscerally feel his discomfort and the shock of him to jihoon’s system

He nudges closer, closer still, looking up every now and again like he's pushing his luck.
Soonyoung whose first question upon meeting the boy who would become his guide was: "But can you dance?"
i love the way you’ve written soonyoung: proud, ambitious, focused to the point of being neglectful of his own needs, but also the willing surrender he’s only capable of with jihoon. game-changing soonhoon concepts i fear

thank you for writing and sharing!

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