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dawn ([personal profile] tenderlyache) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2025-01-04 07:50 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] an almost palpable ache

ahhhh i loved this!! girls jc with a sprinkle of kmg as a fill to this prompt - truly a dream scenario that felt catered to me specifically

the kick of jealousy & jeonghan's voice in this line felt so emotionally potent: "Believe it, she wanted to scream. She chose you!" this line vs. the flashback scene & additional context to their relationship - yjh, did csc know you were a choice for her...... ;___; the "what if" of the flashback makes it more painful because it's so easy to imagine an alternate way that things could have played out between them

thank you so much for writing & sharing!!! your writing is such a treat to read ♡♡

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